June 16th, 2001

victory!

wow

i don't think i've ever written that much that quickly. go lookit my writing journal verbalkint (which most of you horrible horrible people don't have friended or anything. as if!), i wrote all that last entry in about an hour. in word, that's 6 pages. i'll usually write about 1 page an hour when i'm working at it.
this is an idea i've had for quite awhile now, a year at least. not so fleshed out until now, but the basic concept that comes out in the end. it was very strong in my mind tonight, driving home, so i got back and had to write it out right away. and it all just poured out. i haven't gone back to reread it, so it's probably terribly rough.

i have interesting things to report, today was quite the odd day. but i'll get to that tomorrow, it's hella hot right now, not to mention late, so i'm just getting to bed.

so yeah, any comments anyone cares to give, i'd be ecstatic. i have trouble objectively reading my own writing, i can't tell what should be trimmed, what should be expanded. and probably more importantly, what makes sense or not. i know a lot of what i write is hard to follow, often intentionally so, but straddling that line is hard. sometimes it gets too incomprehensible, which defeats the purpose.

and the title, btw, is the name of a song by systematic. it came to mind, driving home, as appropriate, but i'm not entirely sure why.
  • Current Music
    deftones - knife prty
victory!

f?!

ok, i can see something cooling off if it's left sitting around for a bit after being toasted, but how can toast untoast itself?? isn't the toasting process fairly permanent?
  • Current Music
    Days Of The New - The Downtown
victory!

yeah....

there's a little girl I know
you might know her too
she looks so good
she looks so cute
standin' next to you
and I don't know what to do
I want your girlfriend to be my
I want your girlfriend to be my
I want your girlfriend to be my girlfriend, too
she's so fuckin' cute
I wish that she was mine
she's so fuckin' cute
I'm gonna lose my mind, baby
I don't know what to do
I don't know what to do
maybe I could kill you
I want your girlfriend to be my
I want your girlfriend to be my
I want your girlfriend to be my girlfriend, too
I want your girlfriend to be, be, be, be my girlfriend
cuz she's so cute, I don't know what to do
maybe she could love me too
I want your girlfriend to be my girlfriend
I said, I want your girlfriend to be my girlfriend too
I want your girlfriend to be my
I want your girlfriend to be my
I want your girlfriend to be my girlfriend too, too
I want your girlfriend to be my girlfriend
I want your girlfriend to by my girlfriend, girlfriend
  • Current Music
    Reel Big Fish - I want Your Girlfriend To Be My Girlfriend Too