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August 10th, 2004


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04:48 am
tomorrow i am going to the farm for the day, then bringing renny home, and hanging out with hart and cara. i was gonna get up earlyish so i coudl make it there for lunch, so naturally, i have stayed up talking, and reading sylvia plath, until i decided i should write my own poetry. i used to write tons of crappy poems in highschool and whatever, but it's been a long time since i felt the urge. i think these two (the second i wrote maybe a week ago) are the only ones i've written all summer (actually the only anything i've written all summer, which is a shame), if not all year. and they're both itty. i am incapable of writing long.

Diffuse
Your eyes earn me - my persistance,
one thousand days of dance, of this -
but your smile shines from a distance,
expecting snares; fear not, I am mist

and starlight, softly reflected
glimmers of warmth, and easily traveled.
I try to cohere, be collected,
but like hair, like nets, I'm safely unraveled.

galaxies
you smile like glinting sunlight
off your skin's soft dawn
i can't help orbiting the singular
silent points your eyelids rest on
each tooth a column in a calendar shrine
words burn upon spheres, achingly not mine
this is the space you inhabit, velvet dark and soft
with holes cut for stars, peering, admiring, aloft

(5 shots upside the head | en garde!)

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From:leyse
Date:August 10th, 2004 10:02 am (UTC)
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those are beautiful.
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From:kingnixon
Date:August 12th, 2004 05:34 pm (UTC)
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thank you
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From:zombeer
Date:August 10th, 2004 07:37 pm (UTC)
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keep writin foo!!!
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From:kingnixon
Date:August 12th, 2004 05:35 pm (UTC)
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i shall try!
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From:idadebeautreux
Date:August 11th, 2004 06:23 am (UTC)
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This is Teh Shit

http://www.livejournal.com/users/clixnwhistles/

Do you know who's journal that is?

MC CHRIS'!! No joke. From http://mcchris.com

Check it out. Share with Kate.

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